Honestly, I wrote another ending before this one. And it didn't turn out so well. I rewrote using only the first three paragraphs of the original, and the boom... the daydream was born. It's a classic Rebecca move. When I don't know how to end something... make it a dream.
See, now I'm gonna go all author-like on you. The thing I love about this ending as opposed to the other one (aside from the little strings comment cause that's just too cute) is that she's actively choosing to live that life. She's picking to go into the world that her daydream created and is seeing what's gonna happen. In the first chapter it's Logan who ends the chapter dialectically, but in this one Rory is active instead of passive. I was really proud of her actually.
Anyway, I'm glad that you liked it! ;) Have I mentioned that you rock lately, cause you do!
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Date: 2005-02-10 06:25 pm (UTC)See, now I'm gonna go all author-like on you. The thing I love about this ending as opposed to the other one (aside from the little strings comment cause that's just too cute) is that she's actively choosing to live that life. She's picking to go into the world that her daydream created and is seeing what's gonna happen. In the first chapter it's Logan who ends the chapter dialectically, but in this one Rory is active instead of passive. I was really proud of her actually.
Anyway, I'm glad that you liked it! ;) Have I mentioned that you rock lately, cause you do!