This was awesome! I really loved it. I get the vibe you're not a F/R shipper by the hideous mass of P/R stuff on your journal but I really found this so convincing and so true to the issues in their relationship. Can I just say I LOVE Rachel's dad esp the part about the shotgun LMFAO. I also really appreciated how you wrote Rachel's reaction to his problem by giving his an educational speech about dealing with it and her research is so characteristic of her but then giving him a hand job, oh my that was sizzling. Amazing smutfics as always, thanks. Finn is spot on esp with the tone yuou give him about feeling not good enough for her after being so ridiculously flawed. But I honestly, I know theres shipwars and whatnot, I sin cerely love the flaws in their relationship, it makes it so more realistic and gives it conviction to see the bumps and obstacles they overcomes as such messed up characters, it's very interesting. I also like that they're not perfect. Anyway, great work.
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Date: 2010-07-27 07:27 pm (UTC)